Concerto for VIola and Strings in baroque manner!!

[Emilianomex]

Hello from Mexico!
http://www.youngcomposers.com/forum/concerto-viola-strings-baroque-manner-19776.html

A little words about my first work that i post here!!!
This is just the test score, I would like to hear advice on how to improve ...

Is a concert in the traditional Baroque manner, explores the full range of the viola with the orchestra in the background ... the concert was written in half a year. I am totally open to suggestions, please do it.
For me the concerto is a delightful work, displaying the the skills of the preformer well. Whit the work is deeply rooted in the Baroque style. That is: rigid structure, piano to forte dynamics, and the three movement form.

The concerto, in F Major, starts with a technically challenging Allegro maestoso due to it fast scale passages, and full use of the instrument. It is physically challenging due its large number of notes and a lot of playing for the soloist.This concerto is definately focused on the soloist with the orchestra acting fully as backup.

The Grave molto espressivo provides a dramatic interlude. The solo line drifts over the orchestra line and as one crescendo the other decrescendos. It seems that the two parts are in a continuous harmonic battle. Finally, after the viola's last word, the work drifts off into a uncertain ending.

With a lively theme, the Molto vivace-giocoso molto maestoso trots onto stage. This lively movement closes the concerto out whit a theme of fast arpeggios and virtuous expression. Skipping thought the range of the viola, modulation to D major is a small respite from the seriousness of the previous theme, The concert ends whit the tonic chord...

Enjoy...

For anyone who wants to interpret it, please send me a message and i will send the parts.

Emiliano Arroyo C.


I HAVE NOW UPLOADED THE MIDI FILES!!!!!

[grantco]

Hi,

Just as someone on YCF asked, please provide an mp3 of the piece. My humming to myself multiple parts in 3 or 4 clefs skills aren't probably up to the task.... 

Grant

p.s. By your posting this here and mentioning that it is a "concert in traditional baroque manner," are we to assume that you'd like advice on how well it sticks to "traditional baroque manner?"

[Emilianomex]

hello.
well i would like advices in any way... i try to stick to baroque forms, but after all, i'm only a begginer...

[grantco]

hello.
well i would like advices in any way... i try to stick to baroque forms, but after all, i'm only a begginer...

OK, well first try to post an mp3 so we can hear it as well as see it 

[SimenN]

Hey there!
Like Grant said, its hard to get anything out of it without a mp3 or midi.
Im looking forward to listen

Simen

[Emilianomex]

HELLO!

I have now uploaded the MIDI files....  please ear it